I'm really liking the 1st one, the typography is awesome, the text alignment is pleasing to the eye, and it seems to just fit very well together.
My only things are the big empty space next to the leg (although I feel like if there was something in there it would be too cluttered) and the squished text at the bottom of the page. I would suggest for more breathing room, to shorten the green border (don't get rid of it though, it adds a nice touch. It'd be cool have it around all the sides.) and stretch out the text a bit more.
The bottom one I'm not really feeling just because the hat is just there, and also it's blocking the shape of the leg which kinda throws it off. Overall, really nice designs, just need a few tweaks.
I like the placement of the leg in the top design better. Too much space on the right. The new typography on the bottom is nice. Mimics the step like look of the text through out the design. This is a nice touch because the poster is about a leg and foot which we associate with stepping. Love the extra green border. Make sure it is perfectly lined up on the top of the page and the left.
I'm really liking the 1st one, the typography is awesome, the text alignment is pleasing to the eye, and it seems to just fit very well together.
ReplyDeleteMy only things are the big empty space next to the leg (although I feel like if there was something in there it would be too cluttered) and the squished text at the bottom of the page. I would suggest for more breathing room, to shorten the green border (don't get rid of it though, it adds a nice touch. It'd be cool have it around all the sides.) and stretch out the text a bit more.
The bottom one I'm not really feeling just because the hat is just there, and also it's blocking the shape of the leg which kinda throws it off. Overall, really nice designs, just need a few tweaks.
I like the placement of the leg in the top design better. Too much space on the right. The new typography on the bottom is nice. Mimics the step like look of the text through out the design. This is a nice touch because the poster is about a leg and foot which we associate with stepping. Love the extra green border. Make sure it is perfectly lined up on the top of the page and the left.
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